Day 56 - We don't eat the patients
While I told myself I wouldn't limit my words on this introductory chapter, I also didn't want to spend the week working on it, when I know I still have to write Reflected for this collection.
So, instead of expanding on Myra's interactions with Jenny and Crina, I cut them short to allow both ladies to share their tales without influence from me.
By doing this, I used roughly a half-chapter to dismiss one character and bring in the next. Since, I've already decided how I want the next interaction to occur, ending this small section with the line "We don't eat the patients" was a great way to introduce Crina, who happens to be a vampire.
Tomorrow, I have to decide if I'm flipping the two 1st person POV stories or if I'm leaving them as is.